Class:
The feed back the class gave when seeing my video for the first time.
The Ending is abrupt, as in too short not a proper ending.
The camera is shaky
Second section not as good as the first part,
Misc-en-scene not appropriate for second section.
Try and add credits on different objects
Teacher:
Too short
More titles, remove colons from later titles.
The title of the film needs to be changed
Camera too jerky as Tom wakes up
Too dark kettle shot.
Stops too abruptly
What I have gathered from the feedback, I think I have to re film the second section watching out for movement and jerkiness of filming. Also use lighting that is appropriate not too dark, also adding different shots to increase length.
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